Dominique The Unbreakable

Welcome to the second part! This one isn't really violent. It's more getting to know the character and who "he" is. You find out what Nyshida is. It's pretty cool. ...

This was a very beautiful and heartfelt poem. I could just feel your emotions in the poem. :smt001 Your description about the heart and the apartments, that was creative and ...

I liked this one. It was very creative and the grammar, well, you shouldn't worry. That will get better with time :wink: I'm not to well with it myself so ...

Hey people, so O.K., this is my first story. I hope you all like it, I mean, it took me about a hour for some reason. Anyways, please comment because ...

lol thats good =) shows some people can tell lol

wow, that was really good, and it was really deep too, it seemed like you put a lot of thought and emotion into it

It was a cold winters night. The milky white moon seemed to make the snow appear transparent and glow at the same time. Nyshida stood, perched on a tall tree ...

Well it did have it's very good moments, you described many things well, For Example: The Yarok bellows in pain as it stains the snow crimson in its death throws. ...

Wow, it really gave an interesting take on vampires, and it was funny. You are very descriptive when you explain things. Wow is all I can say. I really liked ...

Hi people. My name is Dominique and I'm a girl. I say that because well..some people think my name is a guys name and I'm like "Umm...OK? No you're wrong." ...